I agree that both are very effective. I like the 2nd best, probably since it’s more organic and also due to the colors. I am NOT structured in my thinking, planning, or presenting. This can be a challenge for a librarian and my job has brought more structure into my thinking. But the layouts I prefer are always going to be more organic. I bow down to your first effort both for its content AND for the structure. There is so much information to process in our digital world that we need to try to make sense of it and your notes are good for thinking about all that.